Monday, May 4, 2009

Uribe or Uribito.


Uribe Or Uribito?

I think that the next president of the Republic of Colombia has and will be the Sr. Alvaro Uribe Velez because he knows how to govern Colombia and he has a lot of experience and knows what are the debilities and the forces of Colombia because he has been in the govern by eight years and I think with four years more he is going to take out the country out of the poor and of the Farc, Auc,Eln, narcotrafic,paras,etc.
While Uribito is a person very intelligent, very responsible but he has a problem that is that he doesn't have so much experinence, so he is not going to be very good with the topic of the FARC, AUC, ELN, NARCOTRAFIC, PARAS,ETC. So I think that the president has to be Uribe.
















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7 comments:

  1. mapissMay 10, 2009 at 2:51 PM

    Nice text it is well structured and you use correctly the punctuation marks!!
    Good job!!

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  2. juanpa mendozaMay 11, 2009 at 7:05 AM

    Jaime,I liked your text because its intrsting,
    well structurated,and it has good punctuation,but you used a lot the words ¨so¨
    and ¨and¨.
    good work!!!!

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  3. andreMay 11, 2009 at 7:13 AM

    Jaime i think your text is nice. Because is interesting, have good punctuation mark, but are some words that are repeted, but the 2 images make dificult to read the text.

    ATT: Andrea.

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  4. Santiago Bonivento.May 11, 2009 at 7:14 AM

    Jaime: I like your text, because you gave your point of vew, it is coherent and well structure.
    The tittle is very creative and the photos are very, very, very nice.
    You have to practice in punctution, remember to put comas, semicolons and periods.
    I agree with Mendo, that you used equal words in the text.
    In general terms it is good, but take into account the things I and my classmates said you to correct in the next article.
    Congrats, I love your Politic Text!!!!!!!!
    I agree. URIBE PRESIDENT!!!

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  5. ...aDrI...May 11, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    Jaime:
    Your text is well structure.
    I think first you have to put the plan pof goverment of Uribe and the plan of "Uribito" so well we can know of what are about and what is your opinion.
    Also I think that you need to check punctuation and verb conjugation i like:
    "he is going to take out the country out of the poor" is poorness.
    The first part is not so understandable ,the part of:"I think that the next president of the Republic"
    I agree that Uribe has to be reelected!!!!

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  6. sofi camposMay 11, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    hi boni i liked i not liked your text i liked it because it is well structured and i dont like it because i dont like politics it is very well and i like the way you wrote
    well done
    sofi c

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  7. chelsea fcMay 11, 2009 at 7:34 AM

    hi jaime:

    the text is well estructured has well use of capital leters but no so well of punctuation marks in some parts of the post.
    nice topic but i thik you can write a lite more of it . nice opinoin but i dont know if uribe or uribito.

    congrats.

    by: santiago jaramillo mejia

    bye

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