Paris
Paris is a very cool place, because there are so many interesting places like Paris, . Paris is very nice. If you go there you must go to this three places: 1. The Tower Eiffel, there you can go up by stairs or in an elevator, it has three floors in which you can see the nice city of Paris. 2.The Louvre Museum, in this big museum, that is long is approx. to 8 km, you can find very nice art, like sculptures, paintings and also the is a representation of a big dinning room of the king and the queen. And there you can find the very known picture of Leonardo DaVinci called the Monalisa. 3.Notre Dam cathedral, in were you can see the nice architecture of that period of time that is pretty nice.
Jaime, your text is nice but it has some grammar mistakes,spelling mistakes ,and wrong word mistakes. It is interesting and well structurated. Well done congrats!!!!!
ReplyDeleteJaime!!!!!!! Your text is very creative and well done but, I agree with mendo, you have some grammar and spelling but you wrote the text with good punctuation! I LOVE PARIS AND WITH THIS DESCRIPTION MORE!!
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hi jaime your text is good but you can use more words not always nice bye
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ReplyDeleteIt is a very interesting plece although it is not not the mare interesting for me!!
I think you could descrive and ssaid more things about the pace!!
Eventhough you did agreat job!!!
jaime youre text is well sometimes you have incoherent ideas but in general terms is good.
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