Friday, March 20, 2009
There are th corrections: My legacy
When I grow up, I want to be a civil engineer, and Iwant my legacy to be remembered by a lot of people, "I want to do great things, like: helping people that do not have so much resources for doing things, I will also like to do schools, houses, etc. for the poor people and when Iam not more in the world, I want that all people remember what Jaime Andres Arbelaez did for helping the world. I am going too take the money of the people that one to help me, giving me money, food or cloth. And if the people dont help me I will try to give the much money I can because of my job, or I think taht the people are going to help because of that job.
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Jaime, the text is coherent and you have few spelling mistakes, but you did not put ANY period in the text (only the ending one), so it is difficult to understand it.
ReplyDeleteI hope your legancy become truth and with this you will help many people.
Congrats.
jaime, you did a great text and you didnt made spelling mistakes but you missed a litle bit of coherence.Congrats!
ReplyDeleteJaime is a good text i like the end is like different i dont know i think you have to say what you want to do more openn more thing s but is good bye
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